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Comment on would you read this book?? by GMay27

GMay27 — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 13:05:21 +0000

oh geeze….please just fix this and then repost… its back and forth and repeats alot..plus the form of it makes me not want to read it.
Itll be okay though…just back track. Its always good to edit stuff before you post it on here because people on here arent soft about their reads..

Comment on would you read this book?? by Liz S

Liz S — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 13:05:21 +0000

It falls flat. There really isn’t any sort of detail, your characters are cliche, you’re telling instead of showing, and you’re lacking in grammar. Also, repeating what’s being said in the story, just because it’s a journal? Bad idea.

Comment on would you read this book?? by Emo Angel

Emo Angel — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 13:05:21 +0000

You start the story with information, and repeat it all in the journal entry. Just have it be the journal entry. Repetitions - especially that early on - are bad.

Also, it goes from 6:13 am to 6:00 am to 6:34 am to 6:02 am with no given reason…

Comment on would you read this book?? by Breakaway

Breakaway — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 13:05:21 +0000

I Would Read This

But i think you should change the idea of a journal, you should write it like a normal story because you are repeating so much.
And you should add more details about the characters in the first chapter.
I also like how the characters are different from each other and have a lot of contrasts.

With a little fix this book would be amazing ^____^

Comment on i cant stop buying stuff i dont need? by Twilightfreak888

Twilightfreak888 — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 22:48:07 +0000

just have will power

or use UR OWN MONEY

instead of ur parents

that really helps my not buy things i dont need

cud u answer my q?
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AsQHuIY1UoZ00C1qE_nVs7kLxgt.;_ylv=3?qid=20080820085445AAuAKLu

Comment on i cant stop buying stuff i dont need? by i am awesome

i am awesome — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 22:48:07 +0000

spend all your money and then you can’t buy anything. or have someone hide your money and when you actually need some they will give you some.

Comment on i cant stop buying stuff i dont need? by Gaby Jonas

Gaby Jonas — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 22:48:07 +0000

if you know its wrong and you dont need anymore then stop buying them!

Comment on i cant stop buying stuff i dont need? by Shannon R

Shannon R — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 22:48:07 +0000

You’re a shopaholic, what is actually real. If it tends to be too much and you find yourself in debt, some people say you should have an intervention between your friends and family who will say why you need to stop shopping, since it’s screwing up your life. I don’t think you’re that bad though, you just need some self control. When you walk into a store, don’t grab the first cute thing, budget yourself, and only buy a small thing, or one thing from the mall or store. You don’t need to go all out and buy 50 things. Plus, ask yourself, do I already have something like this at home or do I really need it?

Comment on i cant stop buying stuff i dont need? by oOdaisyOo

oOdaisyOo — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 22:48:07 +0000

Put money in a savings account that you can’t touch. Then you really don’t have any money. Then, when you get enough, buy yourself something really nice or expensive. Have something to look forward to.

Comment on i cant stop buying stuff i dont need? by Liz A

Liz A — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 22:48:07 +0000

You can stop. It’s called willpower.

Just don’t go to the store as much, and tell yourself, "Honestly, do I need this?".

Or you can just wait til you spend all your money and that should stop you.